chapter one
4.00 and KFC it wasn't open KFC kid was waiting for the manager to arrive but he never did this was weird but always opened at 4.00 as KFC kid walked away he noticed that no one was at the supermarket but it was open KFC kid wondered why was the supermarket open and no one was in there and in KFC wasn't open and no one was in there he went to investigate the supermarket he went down every ile but couldn't find anything he checked every ile except the vegetable ile he knew that them vegetables can be sneaky and they had always been trying to take over KFC he knew it had to be them he hit down every box in the store except a carrot box he knew carrot king did it he hit the box and then he fell down a trap door when he hit the ground there where two bodyguards, they said you can not go in and then KFC kid kickflipped them both in the face and walked in like nothing happened in the bar he asked to see carrot king the beetroot at the bar this time he held out 50$ and he asked again the beetroot said to go over to the gold door the beetroot went to grab the 50$ but KFC kid snaged it and put it in his pocket he went over to the gold door and tryed to kick it open but it didn't budge he walked over to the biggest vegetable in the room and picked him up and froo him froo the door and it brok down the door and KFC kid saw carrot king was torturing him until the manager gave him KFC KFC kid said stop I've been working my butt off all day and now let me kick your'se it was agood fight but KFC kid won the fight and saved the manager and KFC but from behind finny fish
THE END
keep on reading my story please the next chapter will be under neth the sea
By Harlem
Wow Harlem I love this! I like the way you have thought about the problem and how KFC Kid would solve it. Maybe you could go through and add in your fullstops so that it reads better?
ReplyDeleteHarlem - KFC kid 8/11/18
ReplyDeleteI like…your story. I think it is amazing especially the bit when he was waiting.
Next time… adding full stops so the sentence is not so long and makes it easier to read.
Question…Why did you choose to do the KFC kid?
I like that KFC kid always wins the fights. He knew there was something suspicious and he saved the day. Next time you could use more full stops. I put a full stop when i need to take a breath. How did you think these stories up?
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