Friday 7 September 2018

pasta gets flushed


chapter three 

KFC kid was tired and hadn't had a rest in about 48 hours he couldn't fight back poopy pasta kidnaped him and took him to the bathroom and tied KFC kid with a rope and held him over the toilet an said give me KFC.KFC kid said "never" in a tired sound but from behind of poopy pasta it was KFC kids sidekick chicken wing he grabbed the rope and pushed poopy pasta into the toilet and poopy pasta couldn't get out and chicken wing pulled up KFC kid they flushed and hoped to never see poopy pasta but more like flushed pasta
THE END
By Harlem
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous7 September 2018 at 08:32

    Wow Harlem! What a great ending. I loved the way you have started to use some descriptive language and have put it some punctuation! For your next story maybe you could remember to reread your work to make sure your punctuation is in the right place.

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  2. Unknown7 September 2018 at 12:16

    Awesome work Harlem, great sense of humour and personality coming through in your story. I wonder what a picture of the KCF Kid being held over the toilet by the Poopy Pasta Kid, and Chick Wing coming to the rescue looks like? Have you been inspired by the author David Walliams? How are you going to make the next chapter BTB? So many questions!

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.

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